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첨삭 부탁드립니다.

용용 | 조회 462 | 추천 1
  • 2020.05.19
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잘 부탁드립니다. 오늘 처음 시작했어요.

 

1. 자기소개 하기

My name is ** Kim.

I am 30 years old. I live in an apartment in Dongtan with my husband and my two children.

I worked at a hospital as a nurse, but I quit 4 years ago because of raising my children.

When I need a change, I play the piano or listen to jazz and classical music.

Actually, I can't play the piano well but while I play the piano, I can enjoy a moment of peace.

And I like talking to people, so I think I have an outgoing personality.

When my children grow up, I'd like to work for a hospital as a nurse again.

 

2. 직장 - 나의 사무실

① 나의 사무실 소개

I worked for a hospital in Yoido, Seoul.

It is also right in the heart of the city's financial district

② 나의 사무실 특징

The hospital that I worked in consist of two 10-story buildings.

I worked at ER and ER is located on first floor.

When you walk into ER, you can see a room called "triage station".

In this room, we can triage our patient. After passing that room, you can see many beds, computers, doctors and nurses.

You can get medical help ASAP

③ 사무실에 대한 내 생각

Some people think that ER is scary place.

But I don't think so.

There is sadness and despair, but also happiness.

There are a lot of stories of people. So I love this place

 

3. 직장 - 점심시간 보내는 경향

My lunch time is set at 12:30 and lasts an hour.

But I worked at ER so it is hard to keep the lunch time. Somedays I can have lunch during 10 minutes,

somedays I cannot have lunch at all.

When I have lunch, I usually go to staff cafeteria.

Actually, the lunch of the staff cafeteria is not delicious but I have no choice.

And it is difficult to have some time to myself.

Because I should spell the other nurses who can't have lunch.

I'm thankful I can have lunch time even though it is too short and the lunch is not delicious.

Because I have lunch that day!

 

4. 직장 - 출근하는 과정

I usually take the bus to go to work.

It takes about 40 minutes.

I leave my house an hour before starting work and I walked to the bus station for five minutes.

After that, I take the bus heading nearby my work for 20 minutes.

In the meantime it pass 8 stops. After getting off the bus, I walk for about 10 minutes to work.

I work in three shifts every day. It is different from the others. I have no rush hour!

So I can enjoy this time. I like it!

 

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