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- 2021.09.26
My favorite park is Han river park. It is city park and it is in fornt of my house. It is so peaceful and beautiful. There are many flowers in the park. Also, the park has a bicycle path and exercise equipment. At the park, people take a walk with their pets.I like going to the park with my family. Before going to the park, we sometimes stop by a convenience store to buy snacks. At the park, I like to see the river flow. We take a walk along the river and we sit on the benches and eat snacks. Afterwards, we go home looking at flowers in the park.
I like going to the park with my family after dinner. These days, I don’t go to the park because Corona Virus is severe.(These days, the corona virus is so severe that I can’t go to the park.) But in the past, We usually go to the park three times a week. When we go to park, we usually bring some snacks. We take a walk along the river and we sit on the benches and eat snacks. It is really happy and fun.
I remember the time when I went to a TV program concert ‘음악중심’ in the park.
It happened when I was young. I went to the park near my house. with my family. I was really surprised that there are so many people in the park. We walked along the river, and when we went back home, we saw something strange in the park. There was a big stage that never seen before. So we waited for a while to see the stage. I found out that the stage is for TV program ‘음악중심’. It was the first time I went to. I saw many singers in there. It was really exited.
번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
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3590 | [스피킹] RE:Q 11 토익스피킹 첨삭 요청 드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 212 | 2021.09.26 |
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3581 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드려요 [1] | 마카담 | 289 | 2021.09.17 |
3580 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드려요!! | iiii | 258 | 2021.09.17 |
3579 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드려요!! | 첨삭지기 | 260 | 2021.09.17 |
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