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- 2023.04.01
I cannot agree to the
opinion that the most important aspect of a job is the money.
Well money is important of course,
but I'm pretty sure that money cannot
motivate for, motivate a person for every a long time.
Also, There is a person called Herzberg
He proposed a theory which
shows what motivates people in work life.
who knows that there is a He suggested two factors which are motivator
things factors and hygienical things
hygiene factors. Dissatisfactory
factors were labeled as hygiene factors,
And money was hygienical things one of them.
So, that means money cannot motivate people
in a long run.
And also, doing a work means,
is kind of process of self maturing self-development.
so, if I focus on money, I cannot work
for everyday, because that might be boring, my work So focusing on money would not add any value to my self-development
since work would just be considered as a tool
for money,
Therefore, I disagree
that money is the most important aspect of a job.
번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
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6671 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다 | 정미 | 76 | 2023.04.03 |
6670 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭부탁드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 84 | 2023.04.03 |
6669 | 첨삭요청드립니다. | 김대현 | 76 | 2023.04.02 |
6668 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭요청드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 75 | 2023.04.02 |
6667 | 첨삭요청드립니다 | 김대현 | 72 | 2023.04.02 |
6666 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭요청드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 78 | 2023.04.02 |
6665 | [스피킹] 해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q3 첨삭부탁드립니다. | 한*현 | 80 | 2023.04.01 |
6664 | [스피킹] 한*현님, 첨삭입니다. | 첨삭지기 | 88 | 2023.04.01 |
6663 | [스피킹] 해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 2회차 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다. | 송*윤 | 60 | 2023.04.01 |
>> | [스피킹] 송*윤님, 첨삭입니다. | 첨삭지기 | 84 | 2023.04.01 |
6661 | [OPIc] 오픽 첨삭부탁드립니다. | 강상원 | 87 | 2023.03.31 |
6660 | [OPIc] RE:오픽 첨삭부탁드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 79 | 2023.03.31 |
6659 | [OPIc] 첨삭요청드립니다 | 요정슬 | 87 | 2023.03.31 |
6658 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭요청드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 89 | 2023.03.31 |
6657 | [OPIc] 첨삭요청드립니다 | 요정슭 | 85 | 2023.03.31 |
6656 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭요청드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 73 | 2023.03.31 |
6655 | [OPIc] 오픽 첨삭 요청 드립니다. | 장효주 | 82 | 2023.03.29 |
6654 | [OPIc] RE:오픽 첨삭 요청 드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 86 | 2023.03.29 |
6653 | [OPIc] 오픽 첨삭 부탁 드려요 | 장효주 | 90 | 2023.03.29 |
6652 | [OPIc] RE:오픽 첨삭 부탁 드려요 | 첨삭지기 | 78 | 2023.03.29 |
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