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I think, take a break with my friends is much more better.

I will give you some reasons to support my opinion.

First, it will be effective.

In fact, I'm a university student.

I'm a senior in university.

When i was student, i took a break with my friends.

For me it was helpful because i could exchange a lot of information and help each other.

Also, i could be more positive and energetic.

I think, it will be helpful.

Second, nowadays, communication skills are much more important in education.

When you take a break with your friends, you can improve your communication skills.

I mean, it's all about take a break with many friends.

I think, it will be effective.

That's it.



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