파트 1 두번째꺼 단어 한개 절음 발음 억양 좋은편


파트 2 가든에서 찍힌 사진 늙은 사람 등보이고 서있다 백그라운드에 많은 식물과 나무들이 초록잎과 함께있다 주위에 몇명이 일하고있다(organising 이라고말함ㅜ) 계절은 섬머같은데 사람 옷보고 가을로말함 긴옷입고있길래


파트3무난 there are various kinds of clothes so that i can choose which one is fit to me 이거 문법실수


파트4 퍼펙


파트5 초반에 잘못들어서 hi oliver it s ooo your assistant. i received your message regarding that you want our theater to keep working for a long time. In order to do so we need to attract uni students and make them our regular customers. What i wanna suggest is that i will hire some workers to post our fliers to the uni bulletinboard which is located near our theater and since many people have easy access to the facebook i d like to post our ad on the facebook i hope this 짤림





파트 6 i think people can be successful without social skills. And i d like to support ~~


Most of all these days major companies require us to have a lot of certificate so that they can check whether we are qualified job candidates. And it s the thing they are thinking about(care로했어야) and 평가 머시기말했는디 까먹었어요.


Secondly second thesedays individualism is prevailed on our society so people care their own (business)에서짤림 하.... 잡다한 실수가 많은데 7 나올까요....150만 세번째라