이렇게 해도 괜찮을까요 ??

어떤것이 우리의 삶을 더 향상시켰니 ? 휴대폰 or 자동차

I think 휴대폰 이 향상시켯다고 생각해


I have some reasons to support my opnion

Most of all We can expect bigger chances of living more convinently

And we can get good results

And also we can become more competitive

For exmple in my case

I used to use moble phone

Thanks to such experience

I was able to improve my qulity of life and competitvness

Also I was able to make many friends using the moble phone . One of them is my bestfriend Jack

So in the view of my experience 첫문장 반복