p1 engaging 한 번 절음











p2 꽃 도매시장 삘인데 flower shop이라 했구요





this picture was taken in the flowershop.





what i notice first is woman who is wearing green shirt and sunglasses. she is touching some flowers. there are two women standing in the background. one woman who has blond short hair is wearing red cardigan and jeans. she is examing some plants. next to her one ? other? 기억안나구woman is looking down what she is doing. there are a lot of shelves and pots.











p3 the last time i went 휴대폰가게였나 문제가... was one year ago. because my mobile phone was broken. i needed to buy new mobile phone. i bought iphone 7 and it was fantastic.





in my area mobile service company?? 자기억안나고.. provide lots of services such as text messaging, free wifi.., umm familiy discounts...





i think unlimited internet access is the most important.





there are some reasons to support my positions. first of all, we do many things with internet these days we do not live without internet. especially, korea wifi is really good..(근거 대충 이런 내용인데 좀 기억이 안나고..)











p4 8번에서 you have to pay fee. tickets fot selling $15 이게 들어갔는데 표현 잘못된거 같아요











p5 hello this is yoo calling from main office. oh you have a hard time to dealling with plan error?? promblem?? 둘 중 표현으로 비슷하게 한거 같구요





unfortunately because of the weather you have to change your plan. as you know im sensible type of person. so i can help you. first of all, if were you i would reserve h stadium, it has large place.. large indoor space.. (절음 실수하면 노 쏘리 안하고 그냥 다시 바로 말하거든요..) so it will be good for you. secondly, you should send textmessage regarding plan change(change of plan 이었나) it would be more recognizable than other(methods할걸... 계속 other... other...? 이러기까지.....) . so it would be helpful for you... 하고 짤린거 같구요











p6 oh yeah~ there are are a lot of advantages of living in a big city. there are some reasons to support my positions. first of all, we have h department store in big city. they have eveythings we need. its very convinient. and there are music....hall.... so i can enjoy music life.. also there is complex. it includes theater, cafe, and many cafeterias.. it makes me happy..











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