Part 1~4 까지는 그냥 잘한 것도 못한 것도 아닌 평균적인 정도로 답변한 것 같습니다



6번문제에서 조금 더듬고 어중이떠중이했던거 같구요


Part 5 문제는 레스토랑에서 online ordering system을 만들었는데 사람들이 잘 이용안하는 경우였던거같은데 제 답변은 아래와 같은데요







Hello, this is OO returning your call. I just listened to your message and understand thatyou need a way to promote online ordering system. Here are my suggestions.First of all, I suggest you hold some events. For example, you can serve free coffees and some snacks atthe event. I believe it would be a great chance to explain about the online ordering system.In addition, how about offering people who use online ordering system a 20% off discount coupons?Everything is so expensive these days, so many people are trying to save their money.So I guess it would be working well.These are my suggestions. If you have any questions~ 답변 마무리 못하고 여기서 끊겼네요







Part 6 문제는 학생들이 outdoor activities를 해야 하는지에 관해 찬반의견을 택해 제시하시오



이에 대한 제 답변은 아래와 같았습니다







I agree that ~~~ do outdoor activities for some reasons.First of all, by doing so, students can learn how to work with others. In these days, there are many team projects at school, so students need to work together as a team. I think it is really importantIn addition, people focus more on themselves these days. They are busy with their lives at school. They don't have enough time to think about others. If they do outdoor activities, they would have a chance tothink about others and be selfless. These are the reasons~~ 여기도 마무리하다 끊겼구요







답변이 사족도 많고 꽤 더듬거리기도 해서...레벨 7을 받을수 있을 정도의 답변인지 궁금합니다한번은 나쁘지 않게 본거같은데도 150점이 나왔고 또 다른날은 엄청 망친거 같은데도 150점이 나와서채점기준이 정확히 가늠이 안됩니다 ㅠ