1. I think it is a good idea for companies to advertise on social networking websites, and I have some reasons for my opinion.

2. Firstly, lots of people connect to social networking websites such as instagram now a days to look at others’ photos.

3. People want to know other people’s lives.

4. The visitors will see the advertisements on the social networking websites.

5. Secondly, it’s cost effective.

6. Advertising on social networking websites is cheaper than radio, newspaper, television advertisements.

7. However, it catches people’s attention more than the traditional ways of advertising.

8. It’s so easy to click the ads, and the companies can easily get the information how the customers bought their merchandise online.

9. So these are the reasons for my opinion.

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