3점만점이란 가정하에 몇점정도 나올까요?ㅠ;;;

1 도시의 작은집에서 사는걸 선호하냐?시골의 큰집에서 사는걸 선호하냐??

i prefer living in a smaller home in the city rather than a large home in the country, I have some reasons to support my opinion.

most importantly, if you live in the city, it is more comfortable

to be specific, in the city, there are many transportations ,such as buses, subways and oters,

if you take a transportation, you can spend less time,

also, many people are living in the city

personally ,ii am someone who is very outgoing.

therefore, i want to meet many people.

for these resons, i prefer living in a smaller home in the city

2모든 대학 학생들은 자원봉사활동에 참여하도록 요구 되 어집니다.

i disagree that all university students should be required to participate in community service., i have some reasons to support my opinion.

most importantly, if you participate in community service, you can't concentrate on study,

to be specific, students are important there schoolwork rather than community servoce.

when i was 2 years ago, i am often participate in community service,

therfore, i got bad grades in my exams.

personally, i am someone who regards grades as the most important in school days

for these resons, i disagree that all university students should be required to participate in community service.

이정도로 쓰면 3점만점에 몇점정도 나올까요?ㅠㅠ