파트1 무난


파트2 상대적으로 못했음..
Indoor 사진이다, 처음 본것은 사람들이 의자에 앉아있는 것
사람들묘사. (A man with oo is drinking water. He is crossing his legs. Next to him, another man is holding his phone in his hands. ) 옆사람에 묘사(I can see a man working with his labtop) 사람 한명더 묘사하고 background 에 some stuffs 가 있다고 표현하며 overall, it seems happy.


파트3 짧게 3~4문장씩 말하려함
It takes about 10minutes to walk. I usually go to library about..2 times a week. Its really fun.

문제 rephrasing하며 읽고, borrow 한다. I am a student on a tight budget so I dont have enough money to buy books. So, I usually borrow books in library.

문제 읽으며, 조용한 환경. 시끄러우면 스트레스 받는다. 스트레스받으면 책 읽기가 어렵다. 조용하면I can concentrate and read better. 그래서 조용한 환경 찬성.


파트4. 최대한 문법 오류 안나도록 답안 해주려함.


파트5. Hi linda, this is 00 calling from marketing department. I heard that you are running a resort but you have some problems with events. One is hiking the other is boating. Both have advantages so you want me to give some advice.
I have some great ideas. I think hiking is better. Because its more healthier. We can get rid of stress when we running and sweating. Stress is the main cause for all kinds of diseases. So everyone wants to avoid it as much as possible.
One more thing. I know one of the experts in marketing. William. He has been working as a marketing for 10years. So he can give you some advice. With him, lets come up with the best possible solutions. Thank you.


파트6
Disagree 템플릿. There are some reasons ~.
서베이해서 사람들이 Comedy show가 더 좋다고 말했다.
First, we can get rid of stress when i watch comedy show. But when I watch 교육~show, boring해지고, 재미가 없다. 그래서 난 코미디쇼를 더 좋아한다.

파트6는 중간중간 스트레스랑 엮을 수 있는거 좀 넣었고, 파트5, 파트6는 쉬지 않고 말했네요.. 근데 끊겼었어요.
예를 들면, part5에서 he worked.. he has been wor..working as a 이런식으로 끊긴게 몇번 있었습니다.

상대적으로 쉬운 파트2를 망치지 않았고, 문법적 오류하고 말좀 안끊겼으면 더 좋게 나올 수 있었을것 같아요~

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