시험 이번이 처음이라 어느정도인 지 모르겠네요

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I think it is better(?) to visit a zoo ~~~ <- 여긴 정확히 기억은 안나는 데 문제 표현 있는 거 활용해서 동물원이 낫다고 말했어요

I have a few reasons for this.

First of all, Students can relieve their stress by visting a zoo.

From my experience, when I was a elementary school student, I...went to a zoo wtih my friends.

For me, It was very helpful because I can..(여기서 고쳐말함)I was able to relieve my stress by doing so.

Second of all, they can learn about the animal by visting a zoo.

According to a recent news report, the majority of experts in Korea sait that...Visting a zoo is very beneficial for students 

because they can learn about the animal by it.

Therefore, I think this way.

딱 이렇게 말했고, .... 있는 부분이 멈칫?했던 부분들이고 나머지는 쭉 말함. 다 말하니까 시간 1초쯤 남더라고요.

이정도로 답변하면 5점 만점이라 했으니까 4점은 받을 수 있을까요?? 제발 ...