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- 2018.08.17
1.
I like Korea pop music the best because there are a lot of my favorite singers
and Korea pop music is very popular all over the world.
I first became interested in this type of music when I heard it played on the radio.
My favorite singer is IU, one of the best Korea female singers. I like that musician because her voice is very beautiful and her songs are loved by Korea people of all ages. Also, when I listen to her songs, I can feel happy and relaxing. That's why I'm a big fan of her.
I first became interested in this type of music when I heard it played on the radio.
My favorite singer is IU, one of the best Korea female singers. I like that musician because her voice is very beautiful and her songs are loved by Korea people of all ages. Also, when I listen to her songs, I can feel happy and relaxing. That's why I'm a big fan of her.
2.
I usually listen to music on the bus on my way to the library every morning.
Because In the morning, I'm very tired and bored. But, listening to music relieves
my tiredness and boredom. Also, It makes me feel happy and excited.
So, I always listen to music every morning. And I usually play music on my smartphone.
Because when I play music on it, I can listen to music directly and I don't need to
download music from computer to smartphone, So, It is more convenient than MP3 player.
That's why I love listening to music on smartphone.
Music is like a vitamin for me because It's so essential for my life. I love music
Because In the morning, I'm very tired and bored. But, listening to music relieves
my tiredness and boredom. Also, It makes me feel happy and excited.
So, I always listen to music every morning. And I usually play music on my smartphone.
Because when I play music on it, I can listen to music directly and I don't need to
download music from computer to smartphone, So, It is more convenient than MP3 player.
That's why I love listening to music on smartphone.
Music is like a vitamin for me because It's so essential for my life. I love music
3.
I like Korea pop music the best. I first became interested in this type of music when
my friend recommended me to listen. Korea pop music is so popular all over the world.
My favorite singer is IU, one of the best Korea female singers. Her songs remind me of my
childhood. When I was an high school student, I first listened to her best song, good day,
walking along the road. It was a very impressive moment. And also, It was a very difficult time for me personally. But, her songs helped me get through a difficult time and it made me feel happy. So, now, I'm a big fan of her. and recently, Korea hip-hop music broadcast programs are very popular with young people. I saw it on TV with my friends a few days ago. It was very exciting and interesting. So Hip-hop music also became one of my favorite music genres.
There are many hip-hop rappers in Korea. and Their songs are very excellent and good to
hear. I often enjoy listening to hip-hop musics. So I can feel hip-hop rhythms and feelings.
Hip-hop is also very good and I love it.
my friend recommended me to listen. Korea pop music is so popular all over the world.
My favorite singer is IU, one of the best Korea female singers. Her songs remind me of my
childhood. When I was an high school student, I first listened to her best song, good day,
walking along the road. It was a very impressive moment. And also, It was a very difficult time for me personally. But, her songs helped me get through a difficult time and it made me feel happy. So, now, I'm a big fan of her. and recently, Korea hip-hop music broadcast programs are very popular with young people. I saw it on TV with my friends a few days ago. It was very exciting and interesting. So Hip-hop music also became one of my favorite music genres.
There are many hip-hop rappers in Korea. and Their songs are very excellent and good to
hear. I often enjoy listening to hip-hop musics. So I can feel hip-hop rhythms and feelings.
Hip-hop is also very good and I love it.
4.
My favorite song is Butterfly by loveholics that is my favorite band group.
This song has touching lyrics and sweet melody. and it's loved by many people of all ages.
this song means a lot to me because When I was a senior in high school student,
I had to take a KSAT to enter university that I want.
it was a very difficult time for me both mentally and physically.
Above all, I really had to do my best in everything. But, It was not easy.
I was so depressed and stressful everyday.
By the time I gave up all of my life, this song helped me overcome my crisis.
Thanks to this song, I could have positive mind and believe myself.
Also, I gain confidence. So, Finally I was able to do well in the exam and enter university that I want. So, I'am very grateful to this song. and I love it.
This song has touching lyrics and sweet melody. and it's loved by many people of all ages.
this song means a lot to me because When I was a senior in high school student,
I had to take a KSAT to enter university that I want.
it was a very difficult time for me both mentally and physically.
Above all, I really had to do my best in everything. But, It was not easy.
I was so depressed and stressful everyday.
By the time I gave up all of my life, this song helped me overcome my crisis.
Thanks to this song, I could have positive mind and believe myself.
Also, I gain confidence. So, Finally I was able to do well in the exam and enter university that I want. So, I'am very grateful to this song. and I love it.
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