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- 2018.08.11
1.
My favorite park is Han River Park. It is a city park located along the Han River in Seoul.
and It's only a 5-minute walk from my house. The park is very clean and beautiful.
There are many trees, benches, and flowers in the park. The park also has a snack bar,
a lost and found office and a bicycle path. At the park, people have picnics and walk
along the riverside. The park is very popular with people of all ages.
and It's only a 5-minute walk from my house. The park is very clean and beautiful.
There are many trees, benches, and flowers in the park. The park also has a snack bar,
a lost and found office and a bicycle path. At the park, people have picnics and walk
along the riverside. The park is very popular with people of all ages.
2.
My favorite park is Han River park. I like going to the park alone.
When I go to the park, I usually bring some snacks, a bicycle, a digital camera and a lunch box. At the park, I like to ride a bicycle along the riverside until I fit to drop. Then I enjoy the view
and take some pictures. Afterwards, I have a lunch box sitting on a park bench. After the sun sets, I enjoy watching the night view along the Han River. It's pretty beautiful and
breathtaking So I can refresh my mind from the hustle and bustle of city life.
That's why I love going to Han River park.
When I go to the park, I usually bring some snacks, a bicycle, a digital camera and a lunch box. At the park, I like to ride a bicycle along the riverside until I fit to drop. Then I enjoy the view
and take some pictures. Afterwards, I have a lunch box sitting on a park bench. After the sun sets, I enjoy watching the night view along the Han River. It's pretty beautiful and
breathtaking So I can refresh my mind from the hustle and bustle of city life.
That's why I love going to Han River park.
3.
I like going to the park with my friends on weekends. When we go to the park, we usually
bring some snacks, skateboards, a digital camera and a lunch box. At the park, we like to
ride a skateboard along the riverside until we fit to drop. then we enjoy the view and take
some pictures. Afterwards, We have a lunch box sitting on a park bench.
After the sun sets, we enjoy watching the night view along the Han River.
It's pretty beautiful and breathtaking. So we can refresh our mind from the hustle and
bustle of city life. That's why we love going to Han River park.
bring some snacks, skateboards, a digital camera and a lunch box. At the park, we like to
ride a skateboard along the riverside until we fit to drop. then we enjoy the view and take
some pictures. Afterwards, We have a lunch box sitting on a park bench.
After the sun sets, we enjoy watching the night view along the Han River.
It's pretty beautiful and breathtaking. So we can refresh our mind from the hustle and
bustle of city life. That's why we love going to Han River park.
4.
I remember the time when I got lost in the park. I went to Everland Resort with my family
when I was an elementary school student. It is an amusement park located near Yongin,
one of the biggest cities in Korea. The park was very crowded.
I was riding a roller coaster. Suddenly, I realized that I couldn't see my family.
I was so scared that I looked everywhere for them. But, I couldn't find them.
So I was about to cry. Luckily, my younger sister found me. I breathed a huge sigh of relief.
It was a very scaring and unforgettable experience.
when I was an elementary school student. It is an amusement park located near Yongin,
one of the biggest cities in Korea. The park was very crowded.
I was riding a roller coaster. Suddenly, I realized that I couldn't see my family.
I was so scared that I looked everywhere for them. But, I couldn't find them.
So I was about to cry. Luckily, my younger sister found me. I breathed a huge sigh of relief.
It was a very scaring and unforgettable experience.
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