첨삭해드립니다!:-)

1번 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드립니다~~

Hello! Nice to meet you. My name is 주연. But you can just call me Jane. Because my english name is Jane. I'm 25 years old.

I live in house in Anyang with my mother and my younger brother. Because I am the eldest daughter, I tend to be responsible. As for my personnality, I'm outgoing and sociable person. But, sometimes I enjoy spending time alone. We all need our own time. Right?

These days, I'm looking for a job an english instructor. I'd like to work in this field, because my major is english. For hobbies I really like to reading a book and jogging. Now that i graduated, I'm looking forward to starting my career.