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Hello. My name is **, and I have recently turned 25. I am currently graduate student at ** university. My major is chemical engineering. I choose this major because i would like to find a position as a researcher. Although my major is challenging, it is also very interesting. I live with my family in a house of seoul.  There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister and me. I think i am a prudent persion. This is an important trait if you work in researching. When i have free time, I like to read books. I also enjoy going to bookstore on weekends.

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