My name is _________. I turned 24 years old in this month. I live in a house in Seoul with my parents. I just finished my university education just last month. These days I'm looking for a job as an engineer. I'd like to work in this field because I studied electronic engineering in university. When I want to have some fun, I look at webtoons or play mobile games. I like these activities because they let me don’t have to think about anything. As for my personality, I tend to be a bit perfectionistic. So that, sometimes I really tired because I can't satisfied with my works. I’d like to work for the largest electronics company in Korea. It’s very frustrating and confusing that finding a job I want, but I'm really looking forward to starting my own career. 

교재랑 인강 참고해서 썼는데 문법이랑 표현이 맞는지 잘 모르겠네요ㅠㅠ 부탁드립니다!