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Ryanism
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조회 2745
| 추천 2
- 2017.10.16
OPIc 자기 소개 첨삭 부탁 드립니다.
Hi~ Eva. I am glad to meet you.
I've heard about you several time before. so, it is nice to say hello today.
I'd like to introduce myself.
My name is ____, but you can just call me Ryan which is my English name, and I turned 24 years on last July.
I am a college graduated so I'm currently looking for a job.
I graduated from ____ last spring, and my major was electronics engineering.
I'd like to find a position as a engineer for digital circuit design.
I really want to have this job so, I'm doing a lot of effort for it even if it takes a much time.
Now, I'm gonna talk about my family.
There are 4 people in my family: my parents, my younger brother and me.
I live with all of them in an apartment in Seoul for whole my life, and we live near Lotte world tower at Jamsim station.
As for my personality, I think I am an curious and sensitive person. so, I have an interest in various fields such as
history, society and technology, and I enjoy imagining something.
My hobbies are reading books and listening to classic music.
Especially, I like science fiction novels regarding dystopia and Beethoven's music.
For the last, my words are 'Moderato Cantabile'. it means that it's a little faster but it's like dancing.
This is my attitude for my life.
Thank you for your attention.
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