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- 2017.09.26
자기소개
My name is Yeo Jin Lee. I’m 27 years old.
I live in a house in Anseong with my parents.
These days I’m looking for a job as a flight attendant.
I’m interested in the service field and I’m worked in the field for more than 2 years.
As for my personality, I tend to a little bit short-tempered. I need to relax.
My hobbies these days include yoga and hiking.
I like these activities because they let me relax.
I’d really like to work for a big airline.
Now that my university education is finished, I’m looking forward to starting my career.
좋아하는 방
I live in a house. my house is quite cozy, and I like living in it very much.
My house have got a kitchen, a living room, and three bedroom.
Of those, the room I like the most is my bedroom, which is located between other two room.
My bedroom is not a very large room, but it's my safe haven. It's got a wooden desk, a comfortable bed, a small dressing table. however, what sets this room apart from the others is that the window looks out over the forest.
Whenever I open it, I can get some fresh air, which helps clear my thoughts.
The only complaint I have is that the room needs some decoration,
I may hang a pretty picture or frame on the wall.
과거와 현재의 집 비교
I have lived in the same house since I was born.
So, I can't compare it.
I live in a quiet rural village.
I live with four family members in a house with three bedrooms and a yard.
There are lots of fields around my house, so I hear loud voices of frogs and crickets.
With nature, the air is fresh and i can deep sleep because there is no light at night.
I am very satisfied with the house where I live now.
집에서 겪은 문제
A big problem I had with my house had a mold infestation since the sun didn't shine well. So, the laundry did not dry easily.
I bought a dehumidifier and placed it next to the clothes horse.
After that, The laundry has dried up.
I used to feel bad because clothes are not very dry, but now I feel good when I smell clothes.
Since molds are unhealthy, need to pay extra attention.
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